Monday 3 October 2011

Feedback for blog

The blog created here, lacks content and overall knowledge of the music video project. The blog, despite including initial ideas and a detailed pitch, lacks overall information and ideas about the entire project.

We feel, the blog could do with improvements and we feel your group should include more ideas, shot takes and more detailed and lengthly planning ideas. Your blog must have a storyboard completed, for which you can collect sheets from Tanya. This is a necessary requirement of the course, and lack of evidence to show this, will result in a decreased mark. Your blog requires shot lists and the analysis of two student videos, which must be included in the blog towards the start of the project. You also need to include an Auteur study including notes of the director and examples.

Also needed is digital shots and more research. However, you did manage to include notes from the talk given last week, with a thorough understanding of what was include in the speech. An attempt to contact an artist is also required as part of the project.  A filming schedule you provided needs improvement.

Thank you for your time.

by the way, nice photos. Jus' sayin.

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